Tap a prompt to see how a small moment can reveal something big.
❌ RÉSUMÉ-STYLE
I am a hard-working, dedicated student who has always been passionate about helping others. I have volunteered at many organizations and learned a lot about leadership.- Generic: could be anyone
- Tells traits instead of showing them
- Repeats the activities list
✅ SCENE-BASED
The bus driver’s name was Mr. Abara, and for two years I was the only passenger who knew it. Every morning at 6:40, I traded him a “good morning” for a story about Lagos, until the day he asked me to teach him to read the bus schedule app.- Specific, sensory, surprising
- Starts in a moment
- Raises a question the reader wants answered
Which version SHOWS it instead?
Tap a point on the arc.